My group was formed by Pep Esteve, Júlia Feliu and me, and we talked about plastic surgery.
We used a very well prepared powerpoint which supported our presentation and which was focused on the topic. I don’t know how long did we speak, but I think I didn’t speak enough.
I have to say that we were looking at the audience most of the time, even we read occasionally from our notes. In my case, I tried to hold the attention of the audience with some gestures and asking some questions to it.
We organized the ideas in order of importance, but it’s true that we could use more discourse markers. Apart from that, I think we introduced new detailed information to the audience which was supported by quotes. Moreover, we gave many examples.
The worst part, for me, was the language because I can remember me putting some verbs in a bad tense and I didn’t use much rich vocabulary. Even that, it’s true that I used some connectors and many fillers.
The pronunciation part wasn’t really good, in my case. I was nervous because I didn’t have it very well prepared. I haven’t seen the video, but I think that I didn’t use a monotone all the time, but my speaking wasn’t very fluid at all.
I just want to add that I helped a lot my group to prepare the powerpoint and the structure of the oral presentation; although I didn’t speak as well or as long as I could during the presentation.
I think my group deserves a very good mark, but for my poor oral presentation, I just deserve a 6.5
We used a very well prepared powerpoint which supported our presentation and which was focused on the topic. I don’t know how long did we speak, but I think I didn’t speak enough.
I have to say that we were looking at the audience most of the time, even we read occasionally from our notes. In my case, I tried to hold the attention of the audience with some gestures and asking some questions to it.
We organized the ideas in order of importance, but it’s true that we could use more discourse markers. Apart from that, I think we introduced new detailed information to the audience which was supported by quotes. Moreover, we gave many examples.
The worst part, for me, was the language because I can remember me putting some verbs in a bad tense and I didn’t use much rich vocabulary. Even that, it’s true that I used some connectors and many fillers.
The pronunciation part wasn’t really good, in my case. I was nervous because I didn’t have it very well prepared. I haven’t seen the video, but I think that I didn’t use a monotone all the time, but my speaking wasn’t very fluid at all.
I just want to add that I helped a lot my group to prepare the powerpoint and the structure of the oral presentation; although I didn’t speak as well or as long as I could during the presentation.
I think my group deserves a very good mark, but for my poor oral presentation, I just deserve a 6.5
Transcription of what I prepared to say
1.
So, at first, the doctors or surgeons had to do these operations to cure the people whose deformations made them ill. You know, they didn’t do it in the way to make people beautiful. But, when someone saw that it could become a big business to rich people who disliked their appearance. Then was when plastic surgery was divided in two different specialities.
3.
Do these images ring a bell to you? What do they suggest you?
For example:
When someone talks about Michael Jackson, what does appear on your mind?
Michael Jackson is one of the most famous people who made the plastic surgery popular, because of his hard changes on his face.
There’re lots of famous people who have been operated to be forever young or to be just good-looking, like Belen Esteban.
But, sometimes they only look like a monster!
Anyway, now, plastic surgery it’s not just for rich and famous people.
As all of you know, until now, the medicine has improved a lot and that has allowed improving the technique of doing operations, the tools to do them or the way to do them.
All of that, made possible to reduce the cost of these interventions. We can inject us Botox in every dermatology clinic or we can take away our hairs in any laser centre.
4.
Now, a question for you: if you wanted to change something of your body or if you had to look for a cosmetic surgery centre, is there any Clinique that appears on your mind? Any famous cosmetic centre?
You see that the prizes can be from 1500 to 400 €.
5.
However, why people want to change their appearance?
Maybe, they think it can give them happiness because if they are good-looking they are more accepted in this true superficial world.
Sometimes they get happiness and beauty but normally they don’t.
Cosmetic surgery has consequences: positives and negatives. You already know which the positive ones are: happiness, beauty, raise up the esteem… But, perhaps you don’t know too much about negative consequences like illness, or the worst, addiction.
Did you see the news this week? The case of that poor boy who has been in coma for 22 years because he wanted a cosmetic operation.
Now we are going to show you an example of a woman who is addicted in cosmetic surgery.
So, at first, the doctors or surgeons had to do these operations to cure the people whose deformations made them ill. You know, they didn’t do it in the way to make people beautiful. But, when someone saw that it could become a big business to rich people who disliked their appearance. Then was when plastic surgery was divided in two different specialities.
3.
Do these images ring a bell to you? What do they suggest you?
For example:
When someone talks about Michael Jackson, what does appear on your mind?
Michael Jackson is one of the most famous people who made the plastic surgery popular, because of his hard changes on his face.
There’re lots of famous people who have been operated to be forever young or to be just good-looking, like Belen Esteban.
But, sometimes they only look like a monster!
Anyway, now, plastic surgery it’s not just for rich and famous people.
As all of you know, until now, the medicine has improved a lot and that has allowed improving the technique of doing operations, the tools to do them or the way to do them.
All of that, made possible to reduce the cost of these interventions. We can inject us Botox in every dermatology clinic or we can take away our hairs in any laser centre.
4.
Now, a question for you: if you wanted to change something of your body or if you had to look for a cosmetic surgery centre, is there any Clinique that appears on your mind? Any famous cosmetic centre?
You see that the prizes can be from 1500 to 400 €.
5.
However, why people want to change their appearance?
Maybe, they think it can give them happiness because if they are good-looking they are more accepted in this true superficial world.
Sometimes they get happiness and beauty but normally they don’t.
Cosmetic surgery has consequences: positives and negatives. You already know which the positive ones are: happiness, beauty, raise up the esteem… But, perhaps you don’t know too much about negative consequences like illness, or the worst, addiction.
Did you see the news this week? The case of that poor boy who has been in coma for 22 years because he wanted a cosmetic operation.
Now we are going to show you an example of a woman who is addicted in cosmetic surgery.
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